October 23, 2008
Second-Base Interruptus
This is a very distant relative of “coitus interruptus”…
You’ve seen it before. Hero and heroine are playing a serious game of tongue hockey. It’s … ummmm …. maybe less than halfway through the book (or movie). It’s too soon for them to go all the way, in fact, it’s probably their first make out scene. So you know what’s coming next.
Second-base interruptus. As in, Remy McSwain (Dennis Quaid) and Anne Osborne (Ellen Barkin) in The Big Easy. You know the scene I’m talking about? Yeah, that scene. From the beginning, Remy and Anne’s sexual chemistry sizzled. And when Remy finally gets her into his bed,
they come thisclose to doing the deed, but then …. the phone rings, or maybe it was somebody’s beeper. I can’t remember. Anyway, it’s Remy’s office calling.
Another dead body just turned up.
Game over.
For now.
This is a well-worn device writers use (romance writers especially) to douse the flames—via ice water. So my question dear writers is this:
What’s the lamest “Interruptus” device you’ve seen in fiction or on film? And what about your own stories? How do you bring the sex train to a screeching halt in order to delay the inevitable for a little while longer?
I’ve seen babies used to death (truth and fiction are in sync here). But has anyone ever come up with anything unique or silly? Like an alien invasion or Armageddon?



I like those ideas…LOL… I have to say I am SO guilty of this! I chalk mine up to lazy writing–I realize now, but until you pointed it out, I never REALLY thought about it.
every time someone asks a question like this I go so terrible blank! Maybe scenes where they’re getting all hot and heavy and they say the wrong name and WHAMO cold shower–that one is played to death.
Hmm, I use “this isn’t good for me” to death. I’m shamed. Though I did do something different with See Megan Run. I think this device is overlooked because it happens so often in real life.
Crap forgot to sign out. I’d never survive as a Superhero.
I had several heavy tombs toppled off a shelf and one of them boink the hero in the head. lol. He had the heroine up against a bookshelf, her legs wrapped around his waist and they were dry humping like there was no tomorrow. I really had to put a stop to that, he was only suppose to give her a comforting kiss/hug. ::snort::
I had a dog shove its cold nose against the heroine’s back as she was warming up for a very intimate moment with the hero. :):
I’ve used a car horn and people yelling (yeah, yeah, I know — cliche city). The second time the same couple (both law enforcement types) got interrupted, it’s by the hero’s partner, drawling, “Boy, don’t you know Georgia has laws against lewd adn lascivious behavior?”