July 24, 2008
Covert Co-Workers Make Us Dig Deeper
When I began my WIP, I knew my hero’s house would look like a museum. He’d have Impressionist oil paintings, tapestries, suits of armor, mounted animal heads, mismatched furniture, Asian sculptures and various other knickknacks. His library would be filled with books on Art, Literature, History, Medicine, Religion, Philosophy, Architecture and Science. I never asked myself why because the answer seemed obvious. He was immortal. Naturally he’d accumulated a bunch of stuff over the centuries.
Profession-wise, he started as an obscure Elizabethan poet, so I figured he’d naturally branch off into a related field over the course of his lifetime. Maybe try his hand at a novel writing, or perhaps he’d become a journalist. This lead me to discover he had a genius IQ, a photographic memory, and he could really draw. Just a few more unrelated character traits, right?
Wrong.
That Covert Co-Worker, AKA my Subconscious Mind (SM) had been working on another angle all along.
Digging a bit deeper, I put myself in my hero’s shoes by answering a series of thought-provoking questions like: What if I’d lived 5 or 600 years? What if I’d mastered a particular gift … like writing? Couldn’t it become tedious after a century or two? Especially if that gift/occupation served as a reminder of a VERY painful time period? That would compel me to make a fresh start. You know, take on a new challenge (READ: diversion). Maybe art. After all, I can draw pretty well and in 80 or 90 years when the bloom faded from that ‘creative’ rose I’d go for something completely different, like law or hell, why not medicine? I mean, I’ve got a genius IQ, a photographic memory and all the time in the world, right?
That’s when the light bulb really blazed bright. My hero wasn’t merely a jack-of-all trades with a long life line. He wasn’t just a pack rat either. He was a lost soul without root or direction. A man who’s been hiding behind possessions and various professions … for centuries.
A man who’s still hiding.
From himself.
My Covert Co-worker/Subconscious Mind taught me that.
When we start a new opus, our SMs may already be at work dropping seemingly unrelated details that will guide us to a desired end. These clues come randomly in the writing process until something in our conscious mind ignites. Then we get ‘IT’ and the pieces fall into place. Then we’re finally able to see the big picture.
How does your SM work? Can you recall an instance where you’ve written something and later discovered it was the cornerstone of your plot or the key to a particular character’s GMC?



How does your SM work?
In very scary ways. You don’t wanna go there.
Can you recall an instance where you’ve written something and later discovered it was the cornerstone of your plot or the key to a particular character’s GMC?
Yes. And it generally occurs to me near the very end of the freaking book, which is just SO maddening! Once in a while there’s a light bulb along the way, but usually it waits until you’ve got tons of stuff written so you’ll have to go back and change it.
Bastard.
I do remember that in “Wolfe’s Gate”, I was in the final stretch, aiming for a deadline I would easily make. But I felt uncomfortable about something. Yeah, it was based on the Red Riding Hood tale, but it seemed to be lacking something. Not until I only had a few pages left to finish in a novella full of werewolves did it occur to me that the wolf in the original story was DISGUISED.
It worked.
And meant changing a lot of what I’d already written. Dammit.
My SM works similar to yours and Raine’s. A combination of digging around & fleshing out stuff and figuring out why something feels ‘wroing’. The only thing that comes to mind at the moment (bearing in mind it’s 6:24am) is my romance/fantasy wip, that started out as a erotic novella, then I realized there was a larger story there that i coud either skim over and focus on the erotic, or dig into. I decided to dig.
*backing away*
Ur scarin’ me girl!
Yes my SM waits until I’m almost done to reveal why I used the seemingly unimportant detail back in chapter two. No true complaints because that one detail is how I finish the story.
Not until I only had a few pages left to finish in a novella full of werewolves did it occur to me that the wolf in the original story was DISGUISED.
Talk about an “aha” moment!
I’ve had them too. When something so obvious eludes me, but then jumps right out at me at the last minute.
I’m still curious to know how your SM works. No, I’m not afraid. Do share.
Jaq,
I hate when stuff feels wrong but I can’t figure out just “what” is wrong. My conscious mind usually gets overwhelmed with frustration, so I have to put things on the back burner, otherwise, I’d drive myself mad. That’s when my SM takes the baton and goes to work. I just sit back and wait. It might be weeks or months, but it eventually comes through for me in amazing ways.
Melissa,
My conscious mind throws all this spaghetti on the wall (seemingly unrelated details), and then my SM somehow sorts it out. Then my conscious mind runs with it. I just love when stuff finally clicks for me. There’s nothing more fulfilling than when that last puzzle piece falls into place.
actually this happens a lot. Usually I will be writing fluff and cannot figure out why I’m not getting anywhere in the book, then WHAMMO a tensy idea that somewhat strays from where I started will come out and DOUBLE-WHAMO to words take off.
Dennie,
Love when that happens. Hate when it means I’ve got to delete a bunch of stuff. But that’s how books get written, I guess.