February 19, 2008
Behind The Book with Julie Cohen
The story behind the book: Hair, Sugar Packets and Homones
I got the idea for His for the Taking when I was at a Keith Urban concert in London. I don’t actually like Keith Urban’s music all that much. I went, I will admit it, purely to look at his hair.
Hair can only hold your attention for so long, though, especially through very long guitar solos; my mind started to wander. I got a mental image, suddenly, of a man in outdoor clothing pitching a tent. The unusual bit was that he was pitching a tent in the middle of an expensive upper west side Manhattan apartment.
I even knew who he was: Nick Giroux, the brother of the heroine of my first Halrlequin/Mills & Boon book, Featured Attraction. He was a park ranger and he liked rescuing animals and helping hopeless cases. I knew he was there because he was looking for his father, because I’d written in Featured Attraction that Nick’s father had abandoned his family when Nick was ten. I had no idea where his father was, of course. I suspected he wasn’t in the apartment. I also had no idea whose apartment it was, though I suspected it was Nick’s heroine’s.
I tried out all sorts of heroines for Nick. Mostly, because of the apartment, I thought they would be rich, probably beautiful, sophisticated city-girls. I played with one after another, and none of them seemed to work. But I had to keep the apartment. It was so real in my imagination.
Then my friend lent me the first series of Battlestar Galactica, which I was immediately hooked on, especially because of Starbuck, played by Katee Sackhoff. I couldn’t stop watching her. She was tough, she was competent, she made self-destructive decisions, she was vulnerable, she was even more boyish than one of the boys, and yet wholly feminine. What if I took someone like her, a woman in a man’s world, someone who had so much to give, wanted so much to love, and yet couldn’t let herself because she had to keep up the tough facade?
So I had Zoe. A New York city cab driver. And, I decided because I wanted her to be fit and strong, an aerobics instructor. Obviously she couldn’t own this apartment, either…so who did? Why was she there? And where was Nick’s father, anyway?
One question led to another and so of course I trapped my friend in a car with me on a long journey and made her listen to all my questions and ideas, and then rejected all of her suggestions and came up with my own. I do this a lot. I really do feel sorry for my friends sometimes.
Even after I had those mysteries solved, I still had some problems. Writing for Harlequin/Mills & Boon, I’d always concentrated on emotional conflict rather than plot. I’d never handled a mystery before, or a quest story. I didn’t know how to structure it. My big question was, did I wrap up the mystery before or after I wrapped up the romance? If I did it before, wouldn’t it get annoyingly in the way? If I did it afterwards, wouldn’t it seem like an anticlimax? I remember getting another friend drunk and making her listen to all of this, while I drew diagrams with sugar packets and candle holders on the table.
And what the hell was I going to do with the pigeon who turned up on page 69?
Then, of course, I got pregnant. I reached the first sex scene, set in an orange hotel room in a place called The Lobster Trap, when I was about eleven weeks pregnant, and I discovered that it is nearly impossible to write sex when all you want to do is throw up. I wrestled with that damn scene for days until I decided to give up and leave it for later; I just wrote down the emotions and the barest plan of the scene and went on to the next scene.
A couple of weeks later, I got to my second trimester, you know, the sexy trimester, and I went back to the scene and wrote and wrote and wrote, aided by the best hormone high I have ever had.
Anyway, despite all my angst and puking, Keith Urban’s hair must have done something right, because His for the Taking (under its original title, Driving Him Wild) was shortlisted for the Romantic Novelists’ Association’s 2008 Romance Prize, for the year’s best category romances. It’s out now in print and ebook in North America, as a Harlequin Presents in the Nights of Passion collection.
Links:
My website
http://www.julie-cohen.com
Excerpt of DHW/HFTT:
http://www.julie-cohen.com/books/driving-him-wild/
Buy book on: Amazon.com
Buy book/ebook: on eHarlequin






Ahhh, the twisted workings of your mind, Julie. lol. What’s scary is your process made perfect sense to me!
I’m so glad you got around to writing Nick’s story–his brief appearance in FA made an (delicious) impression. Thanks sharing the process of how it came about, and Congratulations again on being shorlisted,
Thank you, Vanessa! And thank you for having me as a guest, Chicas. It’s great to be here!
” My big question was, did I wrap up the mystery before or after I wrapped up the romance?”
Dammit, woman, which did you decide?
Hmmm….you’ll have to read the book now, won’t you?
Seriously, I decided that the book was a romance, not a mystery, and therefore the secondary plot (about finding Nick’s father) had to be resolved before the romantic plot. Otherwise, it would be an anticlimax. In actual fact, it all happens about the same time. There’s the black moment when the hero and heroine can’t be together, and it’s in that black moment that the mystery is solved, all in the final few pages of the book.
BUT, I made sure that the whole plot about Nick’s father ended up reflecting and heightening the romantic conflict. So that when the hero achieves what he thinks he wanted all along, it’s ashes because he can’t have the heroine.
Even when the mystery is solved, it’s not resolved, because both the reader and the characters won’t be satisfied with it until the romance is resolved, too.
Does that make sense?
(And yes, this conclusion did require many, many sugar packets.)
What’s scary is your process made perfect sense to me! yeppers, me too!
my first two books, I wrote while pregnant w/ #4–there was a lot of death and destruction…hmm…wonder what I was feeling?!?!?!
Welcome to the blog
Dennie, hormones are scary, scary things.
Fascinating Julie, absolutely fascinating. I love the twists and turns of a writers mind, we’re so … different than other people. Congratulations on being short-listed.
Hi, Julie! Good to see ya.
Had to laugh at the sugar packets. I use a different method, but just as bizarre, lol.
Sooo…what’s it like working for the big H/S? You’re doing so well!
we’re so … different than other people
Yeah, you can say that again, Bailey.
So Raine, what’s your equally bizarre version of sugar packets? You’ve got me curious.
I’ve had a ball working for H/S. I’ve been lucky enough to have several really great editors who have understood what I was trying to do. Plus I gotta say, those folks throw the best parties in the romance world. I went to the 100th anniversary of Mills & Boon party a couple of weeks ago in London, and they had buff men with their shirts half unbuttoned handing out champagne and red roses.
Seriously, though, it has been a dream come true for me.
So Raine, what’s your equally bizarre version of sugar packets? You’ve got me curious.
Oh, it’s just silly stuff. I have to work out the ‘mystery’ in different parts of the house. Anything to do with the hero is thought out in the living room. The heroine’s part in the play is always realized in the bedroom. The villain gets the shower, and loose ends always work themselves out when I’m doing accounting stuff at work with thousands of dollars of other people’s money, and…um…never mind…
I went to the 100th anniversary of Mills & Boon party a couple of weeks ago in London, and they had buff men with their shirts half unbuttoned handing out champagne and red roses.
Sigh…
Thank you!
My logic told me you might do it that way, but there’s nothing like hearing it from a pro.
And what the hell was I going to do with the pigeon who turned up on page 69?
My logic told me you might do it that way, but there’s nothing like hearing it from a pro.
I am soooo going to behave myself…..
ahem. so, I know you like writing connecting books. Will there be another connection to this story with one of the secondary characters?
Ok so what exactly did you do with the sugar packets? LOL
And hey I LOVE Keith Urban
Raine! I love that idea of thinking about different characters in different parts of the house! I need to train myself to do that. Do you find yourself thinking of them even when you’re not supposed to, just because you’re in the shower or wherever?
Bernita…oh, surely you should know better than to give Vanessa an opening line like that…
You know she is always just waiting for an excuse to use that bed animation.
Melissa, I hope you got those characters off the couch and somewhere more comfortable!
Cece, I just sort of moved the sugar packets around the table in a vaguely representing-the-characters-and-storylines sort of way. I suspect my poor friend hadn’t a clue what I was trying to do, but she was too polite (and we were both too drunk) to say so.
I’m glad you love Keith Urban. It’s good that someone does.
so, I know you like writing connecting books. Will there be another connection to this story with one of the secondary characters?
Well, HIS FOR THE TAKING was one of three books that were connected–FEATURED ATTRACTION was about Jack and Kitty, BEING A BAD GIRL was about Jack’s best friend Oz, and HIS FOR THE TAKING is about Kitty’s brother Nick. The first two aren’t scheduled to be released in North America, unfortunately.
Right now I’m working on some other connected single-title books for a UK publisher, Headline Little Black Dress, where again, the secondary characters of the first book get their story in other books, or they turn up as secondaries again. I am loving doing that, because it makes me feel like there’s a whole sort of coherent world that I’m writing about. Since it’s for a different publisher, though, there’s no connection with my Harlequin stuff.
But no, I don’t think there are any secondaries in HIS FOR THE TAKING that need their own story. Except maybe the pigeon. I’d be up for suggestions, though, if anybody has any!
Julie,
What a story! LOL! I especially like the part where you struggled with the mystery in your book. I had the same problem in a story I’d written, but it was single title length and I’d never written a mystery before. So I decided to sprinkle “several” mysteries within the mystery. It all worked itself out eventually.
LOL@too drunk. At least they weren’t limes?!
I am loving doing that, because it makes me feel like there’s a whole sort of coherent world that I’m writing about.
It’s like…being GOD!
PS…and yes I totally relate!!! Thanks for joining us Julie!
Melissa, I hope you got those characters off the couch and somewhere more comfortable!
Nope they ended up in a shower the second time, but they weren’t really complaining.
Oh, and the sugar packets make sense now.
Do you find yourself thinking of them even when you’re not supposed to, just because you’re in the shower or wherever?
Yup. Kinda creepy, lol.
Thanks so much for joining us, Julie!
Do you find yourself thinking of them even when you’re not supposed to, just because you’re in the shower or wherever?
Yup. Company wherever I go.
Thanks for joining us, Julie!
Do you find yourself thinking of them even when you’re not supposed to, just because you’re in the shower or wherever?
Yup. I am never alone.
Thanks for joining us, Julie!
Thanks guys, I have had lots of fun!
Sorry, real life snuck up on me, i meant to check in earlier, but, yes, thanks for being a guest blogger, Julie!
I missed you!! Great post, Julie — I so adored all three of these stories.
What’s next on your list? Anything new releasing in the UK or in NA soon?
Thanks Vanessa!
And thanks, Sela, too!
What’s next for me…hmm. Well, in the UK, I’ve got a book on the shelves right now, called ONE NIGHT STAND, with Little Black Dress. It’s about an erotica writer who gets pregnant by mistake. And I’ve got another out in July, called HONEY TRAP. That one is about a–deep breath–a former private detective turned aromatherapist who goes on tour with a rock band, only to discover that the bass player is the man whose marriage she broke up five years before.
In April, I’ve got another Presents out in the US. That one’s called MISTRESS IN PRIVATE and it’s about hot sex with a male model. Basically.