January 23, 2007
No Jenny Craig for me
I have the ever-dreaded saggy middle. I have been working on edits for two WIPs and am facing this in both of them - only worse.
But wait, it goes beyond that - it’s not so much that my middle sags, but in both these WIPs they are none existant - as in not there, as in I never wrote it, just left a HUGE gaping hole to fill in later and now I am stumped.
I have had this problem before which is why I have no less than thirteen (yes that is 1 and 3) WIPs in various stages of not finished. I get to the point where I fizzle in the middle and have a hell of a time getting past it. Somehow on the two I am editing I just wrote a basic time has passed mini-recap and moved on.
Now however I am left with the “Clean up” of said saggy middles and might I say, it’s still a bitch.
How do you overcome this dreaded writer’s affliction? Any thoughts would much be appreciated!



Oh, this should be interesting …. I’ll come back later to see what everyone else says, because I have no idea.:shock:
It’s on the saggy middle that gets me, it’s the dreaded ass–er ending.
Oh for God’s sake, woman—I thought you were talking about your waistline at first!! *snort!*
Geez, not sure I can help.
What I usually try to do in the work is have a continuous up and down, fast then slower motion going throughout. If I’ve got a section that sags for too long, I haven’t done my job right.
I also use “opportunities” like those
to explore the characterization, internal conflicts, or give the secondary plot and/or characters a time to shine, or to give more depth to the main characters by talking to/about them.
And if all else fails—throw in a little sex.

sex alwasys stiffens–er boosts the middle :lol::lol:
*snort* not saying I don’t Raine - but I was talking about my WIPs - LOL
Ames Ames Ames
… sheesh
Bailey - me either :???:
Dennie, did you get my e-mail thanking you for DEADLY MISTAKES? The book is awesome!
And if all else fails—throw in a little sex
You are referring to writing, right?:lol:
Melissa - I did, I did - I just sent you an e-mail (I swear the older I get the ditzier I get, man…)
So glad you like it - that makes my day!
Bailey - LOL - I suppose one lends inspiration for the other - hehe