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Published on May 21, 2013, by in Dennie's Posts.
When is it too much

I finished a book recently and it left me shaking my head. There was so, so very much included in the book. Let me start by saying, it was part of a series—and several books into it—so there were all sorts of references to previous characters and happenings. I hadn’t read any of the other books so some of that was a little daunting. Though I suppose, if you’d read the rest, seeing a little aside and/or update would be fun.

When I finished the book, I looked up the next (and last) book in the series to read the blurb. Yes, the self-admitted non-blurb reader specifically looked up the blurb. I wanted to see if I needed to try and find it. After reading the blurb, there was no way I was picking up that book. Just the blurb alone was dramatic, melodramatic and so convoluted I didn’t want to spend the 2-3 days it might take to get through it all just to see if it had a remotely close HEA that would satisfy after that journey (I almost always have to have an HEA in all my book, it’s just how I roll…anyhoo…)

Between reading the second to last book and the blurb, I got to wondering:can you put too much into your stories? And I’m not talking about adding details and descriptions, I’m talking about actual story and plot points. Maybe because it was a series, the author was setting up the next book too much as well as wrapping up some previous story lines tighter. I don’t know if it was intentional and just her style or trying to do too much—haven’t read her before. The main story could have been told completely and utterly (in my opinion) without any of the secondary plotlines. It would have been shorter, but less confusing and a smoother read.

Don’t get me wrong, I like complex stories and I like peripheral plotlines to books, I just don’t like feeling like a need a character guide and score sheet to keep up with whose doing what, where and when, y’know…

But that is one thing that’s great about books… there’s something for everyone. What do you prefer? More or less? Or is it (with many aspects of writing) all in the execution?



 
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26 Signs

I found THIS online a couple of weeks ago, and it gave me a smile.

Not simply for what was contained on the footage, but because I was pretty much the stereotypical English major.  Yet, there are things included here that would never OCCUR to me.  Write in one of my books?  Never!  But I did adopt their attitude toward calculus, lol.

I think it applies as much to writers and wordsmiths as anyone.  So HERE’S my offering for today: 26 Signs You’re An English Major. :razz:

Have a great weekend!

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Published on May 15, 2013, by in Tanya's Posts.

In order for their writing to have authentic voice, writers need to keep three :tavatar3factors in mind; their readers, the character’s voice and their own personal voice as a writer. By combining these three aspects, writing acquires a rich texture, fulfilling the writer’s purpose, which is to capture the reader’s imagination and interest.” — Philippa Dozin

It took me a while to find my voice. I don’t know when it happened. I think I only discovered I had one after somebody told me I did. More than a few people have described it as ‘gritty and evocative.’

But get this:

I’m not gritty and evocative. I mean, when I think hey girlof “gritty and evocative” I see an old, crusty, grizzled writer. You know the type. He drinks bourbon by the case. Smokes like a chimney. Bangs out dozens of stories on an old funky typewriter.

I digress ….

As Dozin says above, voice is a combination of things. It encompasses a lifetime of insights, experiences and imagination. Has anyone ever described your voice? A reviewer? A reader? An editor or agent? If so, what did they say? Or better still, how would YOU describe your voice?

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Published on May 14, 2013, by in General Chica-ness.
Rise of the dorks

Staying with the Star Wars theme… so this morning, my 14yo is grabbing his stuff for school in the other room and I hear him say, “Oh, I forgot to get the light saber out of my backpack.” Naturally, I’m like, “Wha…” And he peeks around the corner with a huge grin on his face. “Yeah, I was wearing it all last week.”

Wearing it? To school???

Bigger grin. “Yeah, until I got caught with it.”

Apparently, he thought it would be cool to start a new trend and wear a light saber on his belt. He even got several of his friends to join in on this new trend. (Yeah, I’m still shaking my head too!). He went most of the week doing this. Then one afternoon he was talking to one of the principals and, while pulling on his backpack, got it hung on the light saber which then fell to the floor. She thought it was funny, but told him he’d have to leave it at home.

I can’t decide if I am sad/embarrassed or proud/giddy that my (teenaged) child would 1) take a toy to school on a regular basis and 2) get other kids to do so as well. And let me just say, this is my *rocker* kid. He has the long (but not teased) 80s hair. A full beard (at 14) and wears a lot of rocker tees (all alternative music—the screaming kind). He’s not what you’d picture for a kid carrying a light saber—not that there’s *necessarily* a type, but…

I don’t think I have ever started a trend. Or even tried to start a trend. I love that he got the (albeit strange) idea and went for it. Are you a trendsetter? Would you get an idea like that—silly or no—and implement it? Would you follow one that your friend started? (Can’t say I’ve ever done that either)



 
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Published on May 13, 2013, by in General Chica-ness.

I’ve written and re-written this post. I’ve stalled for more than a month on posting because everything I had to say was just too much. I’m stressed.  I am estatic about where my career seems to be headed. I am scared shitless. I don’t know where to begin because there’s just so much pressure on my end. So, I’ve had nada.

So, down the rabbit hole I went and thankfully I found this…



 
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Published on May 12, 2013, by in Raine's Posts.
Because...

…The summer reading season is almost upon us.

And because we get the finest visitors on this blog.

And because those fine visitors also happen to be a bunch of damn fine writers!

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NIGHTBOUND:  LORDS OF THE DARKYN by Lynn Viehl

Beaumaris of York has many secrets. No human can know that he’s an immortal Darkyn assigned to Knight’s Realm, the Kyn stronghold disguised as a medieval theme park. And none of his brethren can discover that he’s a half-breed, rescued from slavery as a child. Lately Beau has been yearning for action—and he’s about to find it with his new mission.

Brilliant archaeologist Dr. Alys Stuart is infamous for her extraordinary theories—especially those concerning the mysterious Knights Templar—and she is unaware that her research is funded by the Kyn coffers. When the Kyn sends a vexingly good-looking man to assist—and protect—her, she doesn’t expect the surge of attraction she feels for him.

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DEMON AT WAR by Bernard DeLeo

In DEMON AT WAR, Mike Rawlins and his Demon Inc crew take the dimensional war to the Haunts. Demon and Mike communicate directly with hilarious results, but the darkness within Mike multiplies when an unexpected Haunt battle leaves him wounded deeply. The holy water again heals, but the Haunt DNA leaves a few extra surprises.

The battles begin taking their toll on the young teens. Sexual awakenings, high school drama, sports, and what they perceive to be an endless war they won’t survive add a cynical edge to their outlook on mundane everyday happenings.

Demon at their side through everything lends the right amount of danger, rebuke, and humor to keep their minds set on survival and victory.

 

…And because Chica Mel mentioned it but didn’t PROMOTE it, and the book’s been kicking butt out there…

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DOUBLE DARE by Melissa Blue

First impressions are lasting impressions…

Pastry baker Emmaline Sharp is one business connection away from turning her bakery into something more than the dessert shop on the corner. She believes she’s found Mr. Right in café owner Tobias Merchant. His Caff-aholic brand of freshly brewed coffee makes him the perfect partner. When she accepts a dare that thrusts her naked self into Tobias’ waiting arms, she jeopardizes her entire future. Emma will have to convince him to give her another chance, and somehow she’ll just have to ignore the unexpected passion he ignites within her.

Tobias needs the connection with Emma’s bakery, Sweet Tooth, in order to liberate himself from the financial and emotional obligations of his past. Unfortunately, Emma’s reckless behavior leaves him doubting she can be level-headed and business savvy. Every one of his instincts tells him to walk away, but she’s a temptation he can’t seem to deny. He’s inexplicably drawn to the lightness in her, especially when he knows just how dark the world can be. Against his better judgment, Tobias ignores his instincts and proceeds to form a partnership with Emma.

When their relationship shifts from business to personal, will Emma and Tobias be able to conquer their demons and find their sweet reward before the deal turns sour?

 



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Published on May 8, 2013, by in Tanya's Posts.

My son:tavatar3‘s English teacher gave the class a reading assignment. They had to do an audio visual report on the book Things Fall Apart by the late Chinua Achebe. The kids were put into groups of four and were given a choice of what medium to use. Each child had an assigned part to play. Someone had to write the script, two others were to do research, and my son was supposed to do the animation. Well, the other three kids left him high and dry, so he thingsended up doing the ENTIRE assignment himself. He’s handing it in on Thursday.

I’ve imbedded my son’s finished video below. Now, whether his teacher will appreciate his sense of humor is anyone’s guess. He modeled the two female characters after his sisters. So there’s sniping and cattiness in there because they’re always fighting. You’ll see what I mean once you hear their dialogue. :lmao: And since his mommy writes romance, he decided to try his hand at it. He’s a 16-year-old boy, so you’ve been warned. :boob:

Anyway, he did everything HIMSELF with no help from his shiftless classmates. Whatever grade he gets, I’ll still be proud that he took the initiative.

UPDATE: His teacher gave him an 88 out of a possible 100. :poke: She said she wanted just a bit more about Nigerian music, however she said she loved the video. So much so that she showed it to her other English class as a creative model for what she was looking for in general. :woot: Anyway, he got the second highest grade in the class overall.



 
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Published on May 7, 2013, by in Dennie's Posts.
The Power of “Star Wars”

I have loved Star Wars since I was five years old and the very first movie came out. My mom worked at the local movie theater in San Angelo, TX and I got to sit through movies for free (could eat all the popcorn I wanted—but always got lemon drops instead). Cut to adulthood: my hubby is an even bigger Star Wars fan than I am (a match made in heaven!) so naturally when it came time, our kids were eagerly introduced to the franchise.

Out of our four boys, every last stinking one of them has a similarly special place in their hearts for Yoda, Luke and the whole interstellar clan. (Thank goodness because it would have been awkward if we’d had to have disowned one!) We’ve taken the boys to see all the newest movies … okay #4 was not born when Phantom Menace came out—and was only 7mo when Attack of the Clones came out, he went, threw up on me the last five minutes of the movie, but he went.

As a family we have watched those movies over and over again, first on VHS then on DVD. Every holiday we tune in to Spike TV because they often run a Star Wars marathon. We have all the “action figures”, all opened and well played with and any and all sundry of items related to the franchise. But as is with life, the boys have gotten older. Their interests have diverged and often they don’t really relate to what one of the other is doing. It’s sad, but a growing period for them all.

Cut to Saturday. It was May 4th. May the fourth be with you. Since 2007, that has been a day dubbed Star Wars Day. Pretty darn awesome for a geek household like ours. So Saturday, the 14yo asks where their light sabers are. At one point I think he had 8 or 9—when they were little—and they all ended up under my bed to keep them from walloping one another. The 14yo finds one for each brother and they (all 4) spend an hour in the living room reenacting battles from the movies.

Hours later, the four of them where all just sitting around still. Talking. To each other. This rarely happens in a house full of teenagers. They grunt, nod and go their separate ways. But for May the 4th, they sat together and talked and had a great time. (it brought tears to my eyes).

Is there something that brings your family (and/or friends) together? anything that you will drop everything to catch up with? And if you like Star Wars, who’s you fave character? Mine is Obi-Wan (Ewan McGregor version); I just love everything about him through the prequels!



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Published on May 5, 2013, by in Raine's Posts.
Mitch and Boan

I gotta be honest, people.

I got nuthin’. :sad:

I shall, therefore, make this a chance to bitch and moan.  About anything, from anytime, anywhere.

Feel free to vent.  It’s good for the blood pressure.

I’ll be happy to lead the parade, lol…

To all you daring drivers out there.  You know who you are.

Two of you practically took me out on the freeway this week.

Honestly, folks.  It doesn’t take much to slightly incline the head to see if anyone’s in/coming across the lane beside you.  Caught between a huge SUV and a van, I thought I was a goner.  And there’s just no excuse for it.  With today’s vehicles boasting multiple mirrors and, hell, cameras on board–even if you’re too lazy or arrogant to look, you should be able to see the situation  SOMEWHERE!! :pirate:

There now.  I feel better already.

Next?

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Published on May 1, 2013, by in Tanya's Posts.

:tavatar3This is what happens when you’re so mired in revisions you forget you’ve got to come up with a post topic. In one respect, this is a good thing because it means you’re actually getting some writing done. So I’d like you to think positively about this very pathetic post of mine, okay? And if you can’t, just take pity on me.

 

 Ginger or Mary Ann?  :lmao:

Yes, this is writing related because … um … well, they’re fictional characters which means a WRITER created them.

So there! :nener:



 
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